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Just a little Darius ref for you guys, because apparently, people can't draw him without something to mess up on.

I'm not one to gripe when people get my characters wrong ( I don't even feel right critiquing them ), but I figured it'd be best.

Darius is not unique to these sorts of things, either, well, some of them, such as the hands and feet, however there are a few things that sets him apart from his blue eyes and chubby build.

Hopefully this'll help some people, I tried to point out all the things that needed to be as well.

Everything is sketched because I'm lazy, and maybe even seeing the sketches may help drawing him.

This is something I shoulda did years ago, too, and may be updated to suit my styles in the future.

Hope this helps on your Siyo drawings!

2009 Raymond A. Alvarez Jr.

Critiques


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What a cute little guy . Instead of drawing him just sitting there you could give him action. he does look cute sitting there but give him live and character jumping, running, ect. Your colour profile picture is good but it would be better to see a front colour picture because your sketches show that his face has cheek hairs but you can hardly see reference of them in the coloured picture. You exclaimed he has a blue jewel but you should have a coloured picture of it. his expressions are great vary flexible depending upon the context of the picture.
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Hm. I really like how Darius is portrayed here. A small little siyo kid with that sort of innocence and curiousity about him. His posture isn't so bad.

I like the joyed expression because it does in fact fit him. though the sorrow expression looks more like he's sighing in disappointment rather than looking down.

Although.. his hand as drawn here looks a teensy bit awkward. It's as if the bone itself is so thick, it rips out of his finger tips. Maybe it'd help if the claw tips were a bit smaller? Well at least the foot looks alright. It's the hand that needs a bit of work.

Hm, actually, the sitting pose ( the lower waist ) seems a tad off as well. May wanna work on that. It seems like the thigh, knee, and ankles are one big sausage with the foot sticking off it. Could just be me though

All and all I'd say this is a really good ref. You got everything down to tail spike. And the style you have going with it really works. Well done. Now let's see if other people actually use it.
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Posted the crit, now to just sit back and stare at this.. child siyo whom still has a big mohawk-style spike trail, and much bushier cheek fuzz! :D

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Get those thoughts out of your head. :l

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Lol Critique c:

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Idk man I just idk~
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Never :l

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What's with the "pink z" on your cheek? Is that a blush mark or what? *is just wondering* Anyway, this will come in very handy when I draw you again!

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Yeah, it's blush

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*pet pet* C:

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ilu2 <3

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